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Orijinalden alıntı: Kubilay

Tamamiyle hatalı tense kayması özne eksikliği anlam bütünsüzlüğü vb... Translate bile daha iyi çevirirdi

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Orijinalden alıntı: PeerNet*

hata falan yok

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Orijinalden alıntı: grkm1

Temel has been a succesful captain.All of seamans knows and win recognition his success.(Bu kısmı bu şekilde yazman daha doğru olur: His success was known by all seamens.) But he had a habit, every morning he opens the lock of a chest carefully in cabin,he reads a paper while taking from inside of the chest and then locks it immediately. Whoever asked him he didn’t tell anybody what is inside the chest. The time when Temel died came, All of relatives thinks it's a great treasure, or the paper which Temel reads every morning is a treasure map because the only wealth is his chest. They opened the chest curiously. In the chest there is only a paper which Temel was reading and writing in paper that:
-Right: Starboard, Left: Port.

Al dostum gördüğüm hataları değiştirdim ve gösterdim. Bazılarını kalınlaştırmadım okuyunca görürsün zaten.

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Orijinalden alıntı: fannyhamlin

Temel used to be a very successful captain. His success was known and appreciated by all sailors, but he used to have a strange habit. Every morning he used to open lock of a chest in his cabin carefully in order to read one paper removed from the chest. After reading the paper, he used to lock the chest suddenly. He didn’t use to say anything to anyone what there was in the chest. At a later time, Temel died. As his all wealth was only the chest, his all relatives thought that there was a big treasure in the chest or that paper was a treasure map, so they opened the chest curiously. In the chest, there was only that paper, which Temel used to read carefully every morning, and there was a writing on that paper which says: ‘right: starboard, left: port’.


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