İLK DEFA ESSAY YAZDIM GERİ BİLDİRİM VERİR MİSİNİZ? [tesekkurler ]

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Education plays a significant role in people's lives. ("Önemli bir yer almak" sözü "take a significant place" diye çevrilmez. Öyle çevirirseniz Türkçe düşünmüş olursunuz ve bunu anadili İngilizce olan birine söylerseniz ne demek istediğinizi anlamaz. Önemli bir yer almak = To play a significant/big role/part'tır. Çeviri yaparken kelimesi kelimesine çevirirseniz çoğu çeviriniz yanlış olur.) Society can improve itself through better education. In this regard, teachers are in a vital position in their students' lives and developed communities. Therefore, lecturers use their skills to affect their students' lives in the right way. However, in recent years, the Internet has started to play a considerable role in education. Therefore the perception in which students should participate in a class environment has been decreasing. (Bu cümlede ne demek istediğinizi anlayamadım. Onu belirtirseniz bir çeviri çıkarabiliriz. Öğrencilerin okula gitmesi gerektiği fikri azalmaya başladı mı diyorsunuz yoksa öğrencilerin fiziksel olarak sınıfta bulunmaları gerektiği fikri azalmaya başladı mı diyorsunuz?)

Firstly; teachers have a significant influence on their students who may become teachers in the future. These new teachers may nudge society in the right direction and lay the foundation for prosperous communities. Other professions don't have the same kind of interaction with the communities they work in. So this makes the teaching profession a respectable vocation.

Furthermore, teachers provide a role model for students. A student who hasn't yet drawn their own path can be inspired by a teacher instead of joining a gang. Education forms the basis of a student's life which leads them to a better future. Therefore, countries can increase their level of intellect through better guidance for students at a young age.

However, some teachers may have a lesser ability to make an impression on their students. If these teachers could not see the feature of some students, They might be driven into unsatisfactory education life. Parents should check their own child's teacher and tendency about his/her ability. (Bu üç cümlede ne demek istediğinizi anlayamadım. Belirtirseniz bir çeviri çıkarabiliriz.) Additionally, there are many teachers who remain unappointed to schools by the government in some territories due to the long list of teachers still waiting for assignment. Moreover, students who don't want to go to school turn towards the Internet which they use to study educational materials.

In conclusion, teachers are very important for society. They have to work hard for their students and observe them. Because; Each student has a different tendency in their formative education lives. (Bu cümlede ne demek istediğinizi anlayamadım.) If students want to have a better future, they have to properly listen to their teachers and practice their abilities with the knowledge they receive from their teachers. Hence, teachers are given respect and through these perceptions advances societies. (Burada da ne demek istediğinizi çözemedim.)

ilk yazdigim essaydi hocam gelisi guzel yazmistim baya. cok tesekkur ederim

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