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Orijinalden alıntı: brooklynn

let me start first people
sorry that I can not write Turkish passage because this written kind of pre-thesis was my task to complete before putting an end to homework. I publish it here because my professor had told me that English is not sufficient to convey my considerations.
I will be glad if you check it and tell me mistakes people

Bilateral Benefits
If we look at relations between Eu and Turkey, it is understood that relations have to take a step further constantly. But in this stage, there is a question which must be asked: “Even though Turkey is not in European Union, why Eu needs to cooperate with Turkey a lot and why Eu desires to tighten relations?” Responses are easy to understand the point of Eu’s view.
“The oil pipeline Baku-Tbilisi-Ceyhan has been operational for almost three years, and is a major achievement. Turkey is also a vital partner for the planned Nabucco gas pipeline project which intends to carry gas from the Caspian to Vienna. The Nabucco pipeline would directly connect the natural gas suppliers of the Caspian Sea region and the Middle East to consumers in the European Union, Turkey and the Caucasus region.”2
There is no country which provides its own needed properties by itself in the world. All countries have to supply their needs by cooperating with others. Eu is one of the most energy consumers in the world which needs to reach energy sources due to their industry and lack of energy to carry out their heavy industry.
Eu belongs to Russia for energy sources and they have deals how to transfer gas to European countries. There was an energy crisis between Russia and Ukraine which Russia restricted given gas to user countries. After this case, it is obvious that Russia has an authority to restrict given energy to European countries. This case emerged that Russia is not reliable partner to cooperate for European countries in long term. That’s why Eu has headed its way toward Turkey and new energy lines. Because existing energy in union is not enough for members to manage their economic routines. Therefore they need to import energy from other countries which are rich of natural resources as Russia, Azerbaijan, countries of Caucasus region. Turkey is purposed as a bridge for energy sources due to geography which is close to many of rich natural energy sources countries. Even though Eu doesn’t want to cooperate with Turkey, it has to be in cooperation for union’s future. That’s why Union tries to tighten relations with Turkey. Otherwise dependency to Russia will bring about troubles in the future in many ways like restrictions or cancelled energy agreements. The most important issue for Eu is not to stay without energy. Energy is vital source for Eu. If it realizes, Eu, which products goods to world and have big market to trade, will be losing its place in international area, in particular in the economical field. To be a global power, economic power is one of the most important circumstances. By means of economy, Union has a chance to influence foreign policies of other cooperation. If economy is considerably strong to deal with difficulties which consisted by major foreign powers, it can conduct its way to further. For example, a country is at war and it has fluctuations in its both internal and external economy. As well as, other countries can implement embargo to block in its acting area. If this country is not enough by itself in inner economy, it will have to stop conflict. But if country is enough to last for this conflict by itself, needless to notice other countries policies.

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Orijinalden alıntı: brooklynn

From English to Turkish http://www.hurriyetdailynews.com/n.php?n=general-staff-launches-probe-into-dangerous-shooting-2011-02-17

'Trust shooting' now target of Turkish military investigation
Video footage of a Turkish officer shooting at a target surrounded by soldiers, posted online late Wednesday by various news organizations, has prompted an official investigation by the General Staff – and debate over the military’s mentality.

The officer shown in the video was subsequently said to have carried out similar target practice during his time serving in the Akçay 6th Motorized Domestic Security Infantry Brigade in the southeastern province of Şırnak.

The video, shot with a cell phone, shows more than 15 soldiers gathered around a shooting target, some sitting, some standing and two holding the target from either side. Capt. Metin Gürcan from the Special Forces first addresses the soldiers, saying: “If there is anyone without courage who would say ‘I cannot stand [here] sir,’ he leaves.”

Türk Ordusu Hefed Soruşturması Şimdi Güven Atışı

Türk yetkiliye ait, askerler tarafından çevirilen hedefe yapılan atışın video görüntüsü çeşitli haber kuruluşlarında Çarşamba günü geç saatlerde online olarak yayınlandı, Türk yetkili genel kurmay tarafından derhal resmi soruşturmaya alındı ve ordunun mentalitesi üzerinde tartışma başladı.

Videoda gösterilen ordu çalışanı Şırnak'ta Akçay 6. Motorize İç Güvenlik Piyadesi olarak hizmet verdiği sürede benzer hedef denemelerini yaptığını söyledi. Telefon ile çekilen video, hedef etrafında kimilerinin oturan, kimilerinin ayakta duran ve 2 tanesinin de hedefi her iki taraftan tuttuğu 15'den fazla askerin toplandığını gösteriyor. Özel Kuvvetlerden yüzbaşı Metin Gürcan askerlere ilk olarak " eğer cesaret edemeyen varsa ayrılsın " diyerek seslendiği görülüyor.

People, please correct mistakes with red indicator through my writing
I know many mistakes take place in. I rushed up while translating due to lack of time. Thanks for :)

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Orijinalden alıntı: thebancally

hi,I need your help.

I am studying prep class at PAÜ. My level is pre-intermediate.Our writing teacher has given us a homework about 'process writing'. Topic is 'How to pass prep class.'
Can you check article that I wrote whether there are mistakes in it.Let me start.


It's easy to pass prep class if you follow these steps.Firstly,repetition(doing biraz abes kaçmış tek başına kullanılması daha doğru bence) is golden rule of being succesful.It helps that you have good memory and keep open mind (hafızanızı taze tutmak gibi çevrilebilir)[bunu değiştirmemin sebebi olumlu birşey anlatmak istersen olumsuz sıfat kullanman biraz bozukluğa yol açıyor] , so you don't interrupt from English.
Secondly,you should try to make sentences.It is indicated that people who try to make sentences in English
speak easily than people who don't do this by experts.Thirdly,you should find activities which are related to English.Such as listening music in English,
watching movies with subtitle or chatting in English with someone else on the internet.These help you at using your English(skill olmasa daha iyi) in daily life.
In short,you will see yourself more succesful and pass prep class easily if you follow these steps regularly.(see olmamış sözlük çevirisi gibi ama bu anlamı nasıl vereceğini de bilmiyorum,gerçi bu cümle biraz saçma bence değiştir.Başaracağınıza inanırsanız gibi başarılı olur ve sınıfı geçersiniz gibi. o da şöyle olabilir
In short if you trust yourself to do it and study regularly , you will be more successful and pass the prep. class )


I think it's unnecessary to translate this.It's simple as you see

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Orijinalden alıntı: thebancally

hi,I need your help.

I am studying prep class at PAÜ. My level is pre-intermediate.Our writing teacher has given us a homework about 'process writing'. Topic is 'How to pass prep class.'
Can you check article that I wrote whether there are mistakes in it.Let me start.


It's easy to pass prep class if you follow these steps.First first of all or firstly,doing repetation is golden rule of being succesful.It makes you less forgetful,
so you don't interrupt from I know "interrupt is used without -from- as well as better to use this i think " you don't alienate from English English.Secondsecondly,you should try to make sentences.It is indicated that people who try to make sentences in English
speak easily easier than than people who don't do this by experts I dont understand why you used by experts.Third,you should find activities which are tied to English.Such as,listening to English music,
watching movies with subtitle or chatting in English with someone elsebetter not to use else on the internet.These help you at instead, in use of your english skillsusing your English skill in daily life.
In short,you will see yourself more succesful and pass prep class easily if you follow these steps regularly.


I think it's unnecessary to translate this.It's simple as you see

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Orijinalden alıntı: brooklynn

quote: Orijinalden alıntı: thebancally hi,I need your help. I am studying prep class at PAÜ. My level is pre-intermediate.Our writing teacher has given us a homework about 'process writing'. Topic is 'How to pass prep class.' Can you check article that I wrote whether there are mistakes in it.Let me start. It's easy to pass prep class if you follow these steps.First first of all or firstly,doing repetation is golden rule of being succesful.It makes you less forgetful, so you don't interrupt from I know "interrupt is used without -from- as well as better to use this i think " you don't alienate from English English.Secondsecondly,you should try to make sentences.It is indicated that people who try to make sentences in English speak easily easier than than people who don't do this by experts I dont understand why you used by experts.Third,you should find activities which are tied to English.Such as,listening to English music, watching movies with subtitle or chatting in English with someone elsebetter not to use else on the internet.These help you at instead, in use of your english skillsusing your English skill in daily life. In short,you will see yourself more succesful and pass prep class easily if you follow these steps regularly. I think it's unnecessary to translate this.It's simple as you see

I have corrected your mistakes above according to me. Hope that they are correct and useful for you. I am not master at english that's why if something corrected is wrong, do not get mad :)) I tried not to relocate your sentences because you must find the way out yourself to get better English by trying :)
About changes in the structure of sentences, I agree with Procaptain
thanks for


edit : I have omitted this part "you will see yourself more succesful and pass prep class easily if you follow these steps regularly."
I added something but then saw my mistake and changed it :))


@procaptain

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Orijinalden alıntı: Al Swearengen

thanks everybody who helped me.I saw my mistakes thanks to you.

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Orijinalden alıntı: frenzy_35_frenzy

Orijinalden alıntı: brooklynn


Orijinalden alıntı: frenzy_35_frenzy

i will translate this news from English to Turkish for you:http://www.hurriyetdailynews.com/n.php?n=turkish-companies-construct-malls-abroad-2011-02-10
pls check it out carefully,and warn me if i make mistakes.

Turkish companies build malls abroad

Turkish entrepreneurs constructing shopping centers have shifted their investments to foreign countries, business weekly magazine Ekonomist reported in its latest issue.

The number of shopping centers completed and being constructed by Turkish businesspeople in various countries such as Russia, Romania, Syria, Libya, Iran, Iraq and Saudi Arabia has already reached 50, according to data from the Trade Council of Shopping Centers and Retailers, or AMPD. This number is forecasted to increase to 150 in the near future.

�There are many reasons for Turkish entrepreneurs to invest abroad,� according to Mehmet Nane, chairman of the AMPD. �Experience obtained in the construction sector is one of these. The second is that companies seek new investment areas as the Turkish market has reached saturation,� Ekonomis quoted Nane as saying.

These shopping center investments also provide an opportunity for Turkish retailers, Nane said. �Having a place in these malls opened in foreign countries provides a step for Turkish brands to become a global value.�

Turkish investors are focusing especially on the Middle East, North Africa, the Balkan countries and Turkic republics.

Istanbul-based Turkmall, a global real estate development company, constructs shopping centers in Russia, China, Syria, Egypt, Georgia and Libya. The company is set to open a new mall in northern Cyprus� Nicosia with an investment of $150 million. �Our aim is to become the top brand in shopping centers,� said Levent Eyüboğlu, chief executive officer of Turkmall.



Türk şirketleri yurtdışında alışveriş merkezleri kuruyor

Alışveriş merkezleri kuran Türk girişimciler yatırımlarını yabancı ülkelere kaydırıyor,haftalık işletme dergisi Ekonomist son sayısında bildirdi.

Alışveriş Merkezleri ve Parekendeciler Ticaret Konseyinin,veya AMPD'nin verisine göre Rusya,Romanya,Suriye,Libya,İran,Irak ve Suudi Arabistan gibi çeşitli ülkelerde Türk iş adamları tarafından kurulan ve tamamlanan alışveriş merkezlerinin sayısı şimdiden 50ye ulaştı.Bu sayının yakın gelecekte 150ye çıkacağı tahmin ediliyor.

AMPD başkanı Mehmet Nane'ye göre Türk girişimciler için yurtdışına yatırım yapmalarına birçok sebep var. Türk girişimcilerin yurtdışına yatırım yapmaları için pek çok sebep var -I would say- "Yapı sektöründe elde edilen tecrübeler bunlardan biri. İnşaat sektöründe kazanılan tecrübe bunlardan bir tanesi. - I would say - İkincisi,Türk piyasası canlılığa ulaştığı için şirketlerin yeni yatırım alanları araması" Nane'nin söylediğinin Ekonomist alıntısı. İkinci olarak, Türk piyasası doyuma ulaştığı için şirketler yeni yatırım alanları aramakta. -I would say -

Nane:"Bu alışveriş merkezleri yatırımları ayrıca Türk parekendeciler için de bir fırsat sağlar."."Yabancı ülkelerde açılan bu alışveriş mağazalarında bir yere sahip olmak Türk markalarının küresel bir değer haline gelmesi için bir adım atmasını sağlar."

Türk yatırımcılar özellikle Orta Doğu,Kuzey Afrika,Balkan ülkeleri ve Türk Cumhuriyetlerine cumhuriyetleri üzerinde yoğunlaşıyor - I would say- odaklanıyor.

İstanbul merkezli küresel bir gayrimenkul gelişim kalkındırma şirketi olan Turkmall Rusya,Çin,Suriye,Mısır,Gürcistan ve Libya'da alışveriş merkezleri inşaa ediyor - present tense edecek.Şirket Kuzey Kıbrıs Nicosia'da 150 milyon dolarlık yatırımla yeni bir alışveriş merkezi açmaya hazır.Turkmall'ın CEO'su Levent Eyüboğlu:"Bizim amacımız alışveriş merkezlerinde zirve en büyük marka haline gelmek".




I did some changes according to me, hopefully you will like them, if any problem in mind , let me know
I am open to be criticized :))


thanks for paying attention.indeed some sentences,in the writing you corrected,make sense the same sentences that i translated.hence,i was in a dilemma while i was translating.As we know english is a flexible language translated with diverse ways,and the significant one is that audience gets what we imply and emphasize i'm open to be criticitized,as well

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Orijinalden alıntı: brooklynn

One more topic as usual goes to garbage due to lack of interest.
I will write some down here but I have flight to Turkey tomorrow in the morning that's why I am little bit occupied these days.
Please people, do not leave topic empty

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Orijinalden alıntı: brooklynn

the destiny of this is going to die one more time
It cant be kept alive with just two people
I translate, he translates , nobody adds comments to find our mistakes
We need lots of perspectives to correct our mistakes, as a result its tthe best way of improving yourself
I will translate one more passage and stand by the reaction of you whether you give me feedback or not
Anyway, thanks for listening to me

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Orijinalden alıntı: brooklynn

here we go last one time to stimulate the topic
It has been long time since I have written here
but nobody shows interests regarding English translation
none of us are master at english
we are just students who try to develop, reconstract or build English up from beginning
Shall I beg you guys to participate in ?

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Orijinalden alıntı: gstrance

I first time see this topic, honestly it looks useful. I believe skill is required of translation from foreing language to own language. Even though i understand articles, i find it difficult that writing in Turkish word by word what i understood. I'll translate something soon, at least i'm gonna try.

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Orijinalden alıntı: brooklynn

On a dismal afternoon on Humberside, Liverpool’s ongoing squad shortcomings were painfully exposed as his fringe players did little to disprove the theory Dalglish has plenty of deadwood that can be chopped from his bulging roster.

Humberside'daki kasvetli gecede, Liverpol'un süregelen eksiklikleri tüm açıklığı ile ortaya çıktı. Oyun planını bozan kenar oyuncularının pasifliği sürerken Dalgish oyun esnasında etkisiz oyuncuları oyunan kesebilirdi. ( alabilirdi )

I have translated in this way that I am sure It is not exact translation. I just wrote what I have understood so far. In terms of understanding this may be understandable I think. I tried my chance for it.
By the way you have choosen pretty hard article to translate, If you translate this easily, You are about to me a master friend :))

By the way, I see the rest of article awesome, you are gifted at translation. What do you study or have you been studying ? If yes, where ?

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Orijinalden alıntı: gstrance

Thanks very much for your translation of missing part and also praise for my stuff. I think your translation sounds ok, it must be true.. And you are right it's pretty hard article because of slang language.. To be honest I stuggled a lot.. I wish i did it easily :)

I've taken English course in the UK. I want to keep up my English, so I try to do something regularly. And you encouraged me in translation, i'll try occasionally and put them this topic, also follow new entries if someone shares..

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